My father's biography
This biography is about one of the closest people that I have in my life, my father Víctor Gonzalez. He was born the 25th of July 1980 in Barcelona and he spent all his childhood in a neighborhood named Hospitalet.
When he went to school he loved collecting stamps of all types wich he still has now and playing football.
During the school he was an exemplary student with great marks and that helped him as he is now very focused and organised. Once he graduated from an engineering a world-known company named Roca offered him a job wich he accepted.
Now he has one son and one daugther and he splitted up from his wife three years ago, on 2014.
Hi Pol,
ResponderEliminarI've read your biography, I liked it but I thought that if I was you I would made changes in some things. Firstly, the structure is a little bit estrange I don't understand why you have separated the second and third paragraph. Moreover in the second paragraph "which" it isn't write right. At the end of the biography I would wrote things which admire of him.
The composition is pretty good but i would changed some things.
Have a nice day,
Dídac